Not bad.
Although I would have appreciated more of a story, the action makes up for it. It wasn't perfect, but I can tell you put more effort into this than most of the losers around here. The art style was'nt the best but it showed a bit more originality than the stick figures and limbless pre-school drawings we usually see around here. Keep at it, try and make a longer one, and don't always focus on the action.