I do remember that show, very violent.
Good job over all. A little flat in the art department and you could use more voice talent. But other than that, not bad.
I do remember that show, very violent.
Good job over all. A little flat in the art department and you could use more voice talent. But other than that, not bad.
Be more funny.
It needs to be longer and funnier, those are the main issues.
You can probably do better.
The animation was kind of jerky and it just ended without any kind of payoff.
nope/
Although I like the art style, I gave this a 2 becuase everthing else just sucked ass.
Now that's what I'm talking about god damn it!
First thing to do: make it longer, then add sound and a bit of a story, doesn't have to be epic, it just has to be something. And lastly, don't ever go back to stick figures, that is the lowest form of Flash animation.
Didn't seem like you even tried.
Try again, only harder this time, but not too hard.
Not bad.
I liked the humor, it wasn't laugh out loud, but it was okay. And I like your art style, but that doesn't mean it can't be improved.
You need to reconsider a few things.
The voice overs weren't too good and it just wasn't that funny. I'm assuming it was supposed to be funny. But the animation was smooth, and the character design was unique, but that doesn't mean they were good.
it wasn't meant to be funny, it was meant to be clever
Nice. A little underwhelming.
I like your style, particularly the way you drew that black dog. The punch line (if there even was one) was a kind of anti-climactic.
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